For this month’s QQ, I’m dabbling with a character who is still
in the Inspiration stage, and will probably show up way in the future in my
Ýdära books. At this point, all I know about him is that his name is Edward,
and he’s the king (probably of Dunsmüir)…but he’s only around ten years old, so
he has several people around him to train him how to be king.
Frankly, I don’t know if I’ll even use this storyline—I only
have a bzillion other Characters to write in this world, LOL—but I like this
plot idea, so we’ll see what happens….
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Via Pinterest |
“This sword is bigger
than I am,” Edward complained, gripping the handle tighter as the long blade
weaved drunkenly through the air. “How am I to learn proper swordplay if I
can’t even keep my weapon steady?”
“Your Majesty must
concentrate harder,” Talír replied calmly. “Your arms are strong enough, but
your Majesty’s mind is elsewhere.”
“I don’t want to
fight,” Edward confessed, resting the tip of the sword on the grass. “It’s
because of fighting—and swords—that my father is dead, and I have to be king.” He
threw down the sword and glared at the ground. “I’m too young, Lord Talír! I’m
tired of trying to learn how to rule a kingdom; I’m tired of endless lessons.
I’m tired of never being allowed to spend time with other children. I’m only
ten years old, yet everyone expects me to act like an adult!”
Via Pinterest (Ignore the horse for now) |
Talír rested one
leather-clad hand on the boy’s shoulder.
“I won’t deny that
life has placed a heavy burden on your shoulders, your Majesty—shoulders that
are, admittedly, too young for such a responsibility. But without you, Sire,
our people have no leader.”
“Father always said
Elyon is the true King of any land,” Edward countered, folding his arms. “Why
can’t we all just follow His Law, rather than forcing one man to make all the
rules?”
“Because people are
like sheep, your Majesty, and need a shepherd to keep them in line. Yes, Yeshua
is the Chief Shepherd,” he added, as Edward opened his mouth, “but He appoints
under-shepherds to represent Him in the world. Just as your Majesty has lords
and governors under you, so are the kings of this world under Elyon. Just as
they are responsible to obey and carry out your laws and enforce them, so a
king is answerable to Elyon, and it is a king’s duty to obey and enforce
Elyon’s Law among his people.”
Edward turned his
back, but not before Talír caught sight of tears in the boy’s eyes. “I hate
being king,” he sighed. “Other boys my age are allowed to run and play in the
fields, or gather nuts in the woods, or swim in the creeks. I’d give anything
to join them—to be a real little boy. I’m…I’m so lonely.”
“Your Majesty’s
destiny is a weighty one, and with great destiny comes great loneliness. Not
everyone is fit to wear the crown.”
Edward frowned at him
over his shoulder. “But if I’m to be king, won’t I eventually have a queen?
Perhaps I sha’n’t be so lonely then.”
Talír laughed. “Now
that’s a matter your Majesty is definitely rather young to worry about yet.”
“I suppose so,”
Edward conceded, lifting one corner of his mouth. He faced Talír with a humbler
expression. “I don’t mean to be so difficult, Lord Talír—forgive me—but this
has been building inside me so long, I simply couldn’t hold it in anymore. But
I suppose a king must learn to be stronger than that.”
“No king should
bottle up his feelings, Sire; that only leads to harm. I know your Majesty
desires to do right, but I also know that sometimes, one simply needs to ‘let
off steam,’ as the saying goes. I’m not offended, Sire, so don’t trouble
yourself on that head. Now then,” he continued, picking up Edward’s sword and
handing it to him, “let’s resume your Majesty’s lesson.”
Edward took a deep
breath, nodded, and took hold of the weapon.
This
time, the blade remained steady.
I love, love, love this!!!!! I see you used Hebrew name YESHUA in there...very interesting twist. That little not you used is so cute! I feel I've seen him in a movie before... Are there any movies he acts in?
ReplyDeleteWelcome, Ketura, and thank you! This post was kind of an experiment, so I'm glad you liked it. :-)
DeleteI like using alternate Names for God/Jesus in my fantasy books--somehow, it feels less "preachy," if you will.
As for the little boy in the picture...no idea. I've seen him here and there on Pinterest and thought he'd make a good base for a Character, but I don't know who he is or what movie/TV series the picture is from.
Thanks for stopping by!